My Mother took me skating
My mother took me skating
and we glided on the ice,
I wasn't very good at it
and stumbled more than twice.
My mother made a figure eight,
and since it seemed like fun,
I tried a little trick myself
and made a figure one.
I feel this poem is awesome because it shows a young kid going outside of her comfort zone.
I have a face for every group
None of them are the same
I switch back and forth so much
I have forgotten what the true me is
I hide my secrets
I hide my shame
I hide the hate that builds in me
I tell lies to people
and then turn away
my face so they don't see the truth.
These people I am are just facades
that I trade and swap at every place
what i would give to turn back time
and to find out what truly is my face.
None of them are the same
I switch back and forth so much
I have forgotten what the true me is
I hide my secrets
I hide my shame
I hide the hate that builds in me
I tell lies to people
and then turn away
my face so they don't see the truth.
These people I am are just facades
that I trade and swap at every place
what i would give to turn back time
and to find out what truly is my face.
I feel this poem is awesome because she is letting out her emotions and saying she isn't perfect.
Good job neil.
ReplyDeleteNeal your going to be a poet when you grow up. Also when you are rasling you will be owning your opponent by the words of the poem.
ReplyDeleteHoly cow, that was a great .poem neil
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