Friday, May 2, 2014

My Random Poem

If you use your imagination
You will see that everything is awesome
With a little creation
Your mind will blossom 
Even though this may sound cheesy
It took a lot of thought
To make something like this is sure not easy
With your imagination you can be an astronaut 
If you want you can reach the stars 
If you want you can even fly 
If you believe I will give you some chocolate bars 
But just remember if you believe you can soar the sky
So if you read our blog you will see
You can be anything you want to be

9 comments:

  1. Poem should be on your page, but also works here since it introduces your blog. Place it in both. I love that you tried the Shakepearean Rhyme scheme, but at times the poem makes no sense.

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  2. You did a good job on this post, very funny and serious too. I like how you used the ababcdcdefefgg rhyme scheme. Great job!

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  3. This poem makes me cry its so good and beautiful and it also uses the abab rhyme scheme.

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  4. You poem is amazing and creative.

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  5. Your poem was really good!

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  6. king neish was the best sorry bishop!

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  7. Very original poem and motivational. Like the background.

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  8. this post is really good , I like the layout of the post

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  9. i like this poem it is really cool

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